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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-03-26 07:23 PM



I thought we were forever,
I feel like you tore my heart out,
and now all that is left
is the weight of what was

Lana
XOXOXOX

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with you
1 posted 2009-03-26 08:52 PM




this aches so much

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2 posted 2009-03-28 12:04 PM


Very Sad


ARCTIC WIND

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3 posted 2009-03-28 12:13 PM


Just like time can erode a mountain to a hill, time will also lessen the weight and size of this big, sad memory.

Finding a new love helps, also.

WT.

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-03-29 05:35 AM


Yes it feels like this ... but slowly it will be the good memories that will prevail and you will grow wings again. Trust.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2009-03-30 11:00 AM


sea, thnx
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2009-03-30 11:00 AM


artic, thnx
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
7 posted 2009-03-30 11:00 AM


W, thnx
Dark Star
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8 posted 2009-03-30 11:01 AM


margherita, yes indeed, thnx

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