Open Poetry #44 |
seamed less time |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I know it seems the same sometimes when we look into each other's eyes and wonder if it is love or just lust or just the same kind of lonely we swore we would never get on our wanting I always thought it would matter more knowing if it was love and if so why but then there were the rains that came and the soft places in your eyes when you didn't have words to use so you just used my shoulder and arms and let me know that fragile woman on some monday's afternoons at coffee when bedroom doors had car handles and we didn't sleep to touch together when just talking for moments was enough like a rain drop loving the sahara during some equivalent august and we were both contented deserts hoping the winds would move us through each other and the time of our why would be seamed less _______________ daark (viscosity) |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
...so deeply, deeply tender, and allowing of the winds that move through us... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
RainDance..thanks so much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Brilliant and moving, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mister you do soft hearted so beautifully I loved everything about this [This message has been edited by SEA (03-17-2009 10:20 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks lady friend _________________ ms suesea, thanks babe!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when just talking for moments was enough like a rain drop loving the sahara during some equivalent august and we were both contented deserts hoping the winds would move us through each other You've written so many lines that captivated... these might just be my favorite. *S* Magnificent!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern....thanks lady friend |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Dark. this reached me in new ways. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HAPPY ST.PATRICKS DAY ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spuddette..thanks my friend..it is so nice to see you back again. ______________ AW..thanks amigo |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark This makes me ache a bit inside because it is so beautiful. Those moments of conversation are sometimes lovlier than lovely when shared among friends who love. Beautiful, my friend, you touch my inside woman. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thanks babe |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
There are not words to tell you how absolutely beautiful this is! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty1, am glad you felt some of it on your shoulder, thanks |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
seamless seems so unbroken, a perfect fit! Just like your poem, perfectly put together. Love the slant, the angles, the way the light reflects in the afternoon sun. It's all good, DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy...it is always a treat to see you looking this way |
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