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scorsese101 New Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 8 |
It hurt me so hard to leave you on a visit It hurt me so hard to hear you crying on the fone It hurt me so hard When you thought we've replaced you It hurt me so hard to know your locked up like an animal It hurt me so hard to not be able to call you when i want It hurt me so hard to listen to that song we both listened to But what hurts me the most is to think about what you're doing, right before i sleep... All alone, with only a countdown of the days that lays regnant in your mind. I love you dad. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
sad -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Scorsese101, This is a very well written poem. It brings back memeries for me from about sixty years ago when my Dad was locked up. Keep on trucking Hon. Love Bobby |
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scorsese101 New Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 8 |
Thanks your feedback is much appreciated, i just write when the emotions are at their high... |
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