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j Tomorrow
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since 2008-08-31
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Boston

0 posted 2009-01-29 05:44 PM


*NOTE* This is taken from one of my old dusty notebooks nearly forgotten. It is a bit chaotic but a decent write I guess. You be the judge

A fool of flesh and bone, with a synapse burnt from smiles
chemical blood and numbing liquids combine
its all it takes to feel almost fine
could you....
forget the trends and forget the styles?
forget the past? its only miles...
miles you have walked,
miles you have ran,
miles you have suffered?!
now could you
spiral your mile,
whether up or down?
smile your smile
or choose to frown?
your high mileage carcass needs tuneup
cause your not running clean,
I hate to bring the topic of doom up
I am usually not that mean,
impending or intending the choice is yours
or sit and live with stupid bores
open your eyes, realize
you are master to the slave you will never see
puppeteer to the emotions you will never be
the choice is yours, and yours alone
whether you snap the whip or get a grip
materialize the thread making you move
or forget what you have to prove
strive and struggle if you may
tomorrow is always another day
let life suck and have some fun
when its so damn easy to forget how everything we do
only becomes everything we have done


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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2009-01-29 07:17 PM


Keep it up

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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