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I Only Have a Hundred, But You Can Keep The Change.
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I Only Have a Hundred, But You Can Keep The Change. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I bet it's wonderful to hold you, your hand in public. Show you off to the world. Must be grand, seeing how your feminine chest rises and falls, in midnight passion. I'd pay you, in years of my life to kiss those lips. _________________________________ The Sadie Series. I thought this one was actually a winner- I haven't been too pleased with my work since "The Netting Distance From Here To Mexico." Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, pay is a good way to look at it..... How is 'Sadie' pronounced? I know what you mean, my wife told me she worshiped the ground I walked on. I found out what she meant when we split up... "SHE GOT ALL MY PROPERTY!! Good write! Eric |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Very sweet and indeed a keeper. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ethome- I was suggesting that I'd give her the rest of my hundred years... "Say-dee" Thanks! Amusemi- Thank you much!  -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, Viking! Now those must be quite a pair!!! ~ of lips, of course! lol Cute poem from a cutie pie of a guy!  EA |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank ye ma'am! Yeah, she's something alright. I hope someday things work out. If not- I got a good series of poetry and a few good memories out of the ordeal! -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
just daydreaming about the exchange rate..Aussie currency is way down . Daydreaming abouut the poem too. Boshii2. Downunder. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Original title for a very lovely piece of poetry, dear viking metal! Very inspirational. Love, Margherita ps: I answered your questions about the two German words in my poem ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touched my heart |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What a smile this poem is! Loved it... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, You treat that girl right, and she'll treat you right. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Boshii... Thanks darlin'. =] Margherita... Thank you! Did you connect the last stanza with the title? I was hoping people would. Passing shadows... Good. Klassy Lassy... Fanksh very much. Robbus McObbus... Yeah, I reckon she might. Sometimes it's that easy. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
The title is the key to this poem .It is absolutely brilliant.Be confident that it is Vik,and dont explain it. Leave us wondering. Hugs anyway. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Your poetry opens up little pieces of you for us to peek inside you. I like that about you. I like your poetry too. Ali-Outtatoon |
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Marcia MT Junior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 36California USA |
I love to read romantic poetry written by a man when it's written by a talent like yours. BRAVO! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you wouldn't have to pay me  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
ala-hoonhoon... thank you ma'am. You're the bomb. And you know it. Marcia... You are far too kind. Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed yourself. And my dear, dear SEA... I'd have no money left, I'd have spent all my money on a 12$ bottle of champagne already. I know a neat spot on the river here. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I do?  I guess I do. You just told me. |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Ahh i really like this. Good work |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
alashanoo- yes. you do.  New friend Spudette! Thank you very much. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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