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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-05-20 07:41 AM

some margarita afternoons
when you are just wearing vulnerable
you say how strong the scent is
and how could I not know you are

and you wish it wasn't so obvious
as you pull my arms up around your nudity
to cover those chill places with warm
before you begin trembling to that music

that weeps from your heart beat speakers
and you get that soft place in your eyes
just before you close them tightly
to keep me from looking inside of your soul

I steal a kiss then, slowly, the on purpose kind
and leave some of my wanting more there
on your lips where your smile is undone
and is just a bit smeared with the whisper

of you begging me to stop you from waiting

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daark (forbidden)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-05-20 08:24 AM

Wow, you have reached 10000 and 1!!!

Congratulations, dear D.!

This "hand song and gradual" fits the celebration perfectly. Simply enchanting.

The name "margarita" sprang into my eyes. I have never had any of those drinks, but the effects on you seem nice, it has a friendly sound no doubt! Better to share the name with a drink or a pizza (which is named after the Queen Margherita ...) rather than with a washing machine ...

Continue to bless us with your fantastic poetry, dear D.! Thank you for the past, present and future poetic blessings.

Love,
Margherita

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-05-20 10:04 AM

You always amuse me with your vision and style.  I have been looking for a thesaurus of Dark to interpret your fine writing. (Just kidding)
Really,  You are one of a kind, The kind I like to read. I am never disapointed by your writing.

10002,  Wow.
Well done.
Tracey.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-05-20 10:05 AM

ms mar..thanks babe!

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Tracey..thanks guy, I do abuse a few words huh..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2009-05-20 12:04 PM

"and you get that soft place in your eyes
just before you close them tightly
to keep me from looking inside of your soul"

Beautiful....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2009-05-20 12:30 PM

ms K..thank you for spending a glance at this window

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

6 posted 2009-05-20 02:51 PM

Congrats on your posts, D!

If this is word abuse, I'll wear that black and blue.

H

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-05-20 03:16 PM

thank lady...I would read your bruises..

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-05-22 11:12 AM

I'm about to start a stretch of margarita afternoons... but I'd bet my last dollar they won't be nearly this much fun. *S* However... you've given me a goal. LOL

I'll be thinking of you as I'm "wasting away" *S*... and know I'll find good reading when I get back! *S*

Loved this! *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2009-05-22 11:41 AM

ms suthern...can only imagine you with
a salt brim on your lips..thanks babe, have a wonderful time.

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