Open Poetry #44 |
January Transitions |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I sit here in the wind watching the easing of the light The sun slips from the church’s steeple turning into the twilight Standing with a shrug I walk with the wind into the night Darkness devoured the day Clouds hide the starlight’s way The dark becomes a drizzle to chill to ice Winds whips up to add a robust slice Drizzle dark becomes pellets Wounding. I feel touch But lacking the warmth for worth; I accept, Pay the price, How can you value touch’s worth? Till it’s gone, Is no price, Just the remembering feel Of what was, And won’t be, Lost to the encroaching real; I need touch. Arrived Through bolts and locks I closet my leather and begin some tea Soon there are two felines begging to me But they want for nothing save the notice of seeing A rub, a pet, what ever they can get, to verify their being Then they wander off to watch out a pelted window As I sit and sip pondering the future in the shadow And before long the hall clock is sounding out tomorrow. Gloom |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Spring will be here soon, Gloomy one.. and I personally can't wait either. This is well done, m'friend.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Partial Thoughts I sit here in the cold watching for each morning rise. The dark slips from my memory, wishing to hold on a bit longer. Pressing my thoughts with an iron hand, the swing of, a torturous weight. Though free from some worries, others arise, leaving the happy behind. There's snow in the promise to freeze the thoughts, those pleasant memories of when, and the building of. I feel for the touch, sometimes forgotten, but I accept, knowing it's in the wait, my value. The real is there for the sharing, though tempting are the thoughts to replace words with the unconditional love of another Sugar or Ginger. Hesitatingly aware~~ M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love Spring as much as I love any other season. (well, right now I am tapping my finger, waiting, for Spring to come, Winter has bee VERY cold this year ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very apropos...bone-chilling 'single digits,' even 'warmer' days when it creeps into the 20's grows tiresome quite fast. I'm ready for 60+F, but accept we have several weeks of winter left before robins and flowering buds shout SPRING. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Professor, I believe this to be one of my personal favourites of yours. ~ and believe me, that is saying a mouthful! I have just now finished my third reading of it ~ so it surely is a I thoroughly enjoyed your sharing of those moments. I saw them ~ I felt them... EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Linda. This is a keeper. Ida |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A gem of a poem, Prof. |
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