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Open Poetry #44

hatred (tanka)

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2009-01-15 04:43 PM

           my soul is angered
      the furiers could not compete
          lost in my own rage
      nothing can stop this madness
        that is growning within me

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26

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1 posted 2009-01-16 08:52 AM

I am a fan of the short and sweet thank you for sharing this one

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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2 posted 2009-01-17 12:19 PM

that which sits in the fire is most often burned...you have succeeded in describing that awful burning of hatred in a few well-placed words...nicely done

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2009-01-27 04:35 PM

to anniepimm, thank you for reading this. i am really glad that you liked it

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

4 posted 2009-01-27 04:36 PM

steavenr i'm glad that you understood my poem and it's message

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