Open Poetry #44 |
The Beginning |
Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
That morn, we harbored by the leafy oak Where sun had yet to parch fresh dew on grass; Its arching branches the desired cloak Would furnish us, a doss where we’d have brass To draw within its shadow skirt our soke As damselfies accoutred our madras: From there we had renounced lush fields of berries To munch each other’s lips as they’d been cherries. We lay as marl and loess clung to our chests, Our cheeks were still imbued with morning dew, And there I made a banquet of your breasts As you perused my late penned billet-doux; Your dainty hands my back and arms caressed As with your lips you would my nape bedew: Soon conscious that our hearts and flesh were swooning Our eyes agreed it was but the beginning. |
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YoungatHeart2 Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81 |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...... beautifully written |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Thanks for the nice comment Happy New Year! Mark [This message has been edited by Marc-Andre (12-31-2008 10:59 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Your dainty hands my back and arms caressed As with your lips you would my nape bedew: Soon conscious that our hearts and flesh were swooning Our eyes agreed it was but the beginning. " nicely written~~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and what a scrumptuously sensuous "beginning" it be!!!!!!!!!! Gosh, you sure know how to write ~ and to love! Fabulous write ~ and read!!!! May the beginning come to fruition in the coming new year! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very lovely, Marc-Andre. Happy New Year - may you continue to share with us through 2009. Alison |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Heartfelt thanks for the nice comments, and a Happy New Year to you all Mark |
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