Open Poetry #44 |
Sabbatica |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dawn’s swollen river of blood, held back, and engorged, finds you, serene, silky and peaceful, as lips blow soft, and whisper dream speak, in hushed tones, of want, as my breath runs, fervid, upon your neck, sleek, and satiny. Sustenance, of my lush and loin are ravaged, and imbibed, as you break, my fast, and satiate, with your holy sacrament, cottony soft, nourishing me, with the salt, from the swollen blush, of your meaning, as your body weeps communion, onto my longing, and covetous tongue, savoring climactic tears as they ripple from the spring, of your stirrings. Undulating, through your whole, of sigh and harlot, you culminate, my hunger. The sway of hips, aloft, as you sweat, and strive through this morning’s, observance. As it always would be, your smile, your warmth, your delight, that is, my testament, that will always, set me free. We are, the moment. We’re indivisible. This is, our sanctum. Thy name is genesis, and you are, my zeal. As the wind blows pure, throughout our, becoming. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Interesting poem very well defined you seem to have a very expressive way with words.. Excellently writen.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
that's our Richy for you Annie very expressive and creates such wonderful wordart for us on our pages blue Richy, love your work as always RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks Annie for the read and the nice review, glad you liked it! Richy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Roniece for always being so very kind, it really is so appreciated! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Those inner sanctoms santorum are highly sensuous and downright sexy! You are a master at writing titillating poetry! Another ~ Soon you'll be charging me! Warm hug of appreciation! Linda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
give genesis a big one for me too........ Loved so many of the intimate lines in this. Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Not that I'd ever have anything to charge for, but if I did dear Linda, your's would always be free. Thanks for always being such a great friend! Richy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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Thanks so much Sir Eric, you really are such a gentleman. Thanks buddy! Richy |
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