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Open Poetry #44

When I'm With You

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-06-07 09:11 AM

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-06-07 12:57 PM

Yo Bill,

This is a great picture/poem combination. I like it.

Bobby

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

2 posted 2009-06-07 07:10 PM

an absolutely gorgeous write, from the heart.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2009-06-09 01:41 AM

A beautiful love poem Bill that touches

the heart strings. much enjoyed my friend.

Lindsay

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

4 posted 2009-06-14 05:57 PM

Lovely poem, lucky lady.

as always

Billie C.

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

5 posted 2009-06-15 05:45 AM

wonderful...truly beautiful... it all sounds so real... must say she is indeed a lucky woman

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-06-15 06:09 AM

all of this time being with you, I have become humble ...

Dear Bill, you have such a beautiful soul and a most romantic heart. This poem is exquisite and the presentation makes it a true treat to read.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2009-06-16 08:17 AM

Bill, it's been a long long time since I've been graced by your writing....and exceptional as always...so beautifully written...thank you
Lee j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2009-06-20 10:06 PM

I'll bet this made some lovely lady very happy.
Ida

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