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Lose to Win
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Lose to Win |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
passions kindled inside out empty kisses invite doubt lose to win, the game is on tangled sheets and legs till dawn touch makes love, makes war inside exposed to gain control in lies flesh to flesh craves shallow trust shadows in her eyes scream lust a victim snared by apathy the gavel falls, no sympathy friends cast judgment, lips accuse just keep in mind, it could be you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Salt in the wound kind of poem... that stings. Good job!! |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Wow. Very powerful message here. Nicely done! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
flesh to flesh craves shallow trust shadows in her eyes scream lust The mental picture that those words provoke Has in me buried thoughts awoke. A thought provoking poem to be sure. Well done Kindred Spirit. Lindsay |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments/feedback, and enjoy reading your opinions!  |
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