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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Lost and laughing answer: birds the sweetness and the shrill absurd lost and laughing on the path the gutteral of m'last love liatening interred, a word, the love is heard lost and laughing: me and mine frost and fasting intertwined like you didn't know before-- patterns mark the path of days tossed and dancing on the way skipping over that big root lost and laughing, tossing soot from these dried out lengthenings; leaves in laughter that groping mastering the ultimate: Zing! The bang! penultimate as I held my ears I'd hear the wishes of my underbreath lost and laughing me and mine aligned alone in mirroring touching on the glass of these mine and me and I, are we from the dried out breath of breathe: penultimate and mine - a creed daring to dance in the dark... laughing in the interlace of my hands awake and sparked: grateful to be dead. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Please don't stop the music  I actually loved this one K, and read it two ways. I could actually picture you in front of a mirror dancing to the "Grateful Dead," and that was quite a vision this early in the morning. Of course I did read a serious side to it too, but preferred my version. Have a great weekend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am sitting here trying to figure out a definition for my new word.  I'm glad you took the happier interpretation of the whole--it was inspired by a late-night discussion of the psychology of rash, impulsive behavior (such as jumping in rivers, etc.) which might indicate a subconscious death wish. And that's what came out.  Are ya liatin' t'me?   |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Passively open without filter. Wonderful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And  I forgot the "ya" in my reply. Yep. I was totally ya'less. oooh another new word?  ? love yamore! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love your sophisticated innocence, Karen. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, liatening? I just love pullin out my hairs and my dictionary. Figured it was a typo, then it looked so cute you just kept it. I liaten to you all the time, sistah K. Sometimes I bow.   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady, you are still my IDOL when it comes to writing poetry! Gawd, I've been gone to long, and then I come back and find this and remember why it is I come back from time to time... yer gift?? Amazing lady, just like you! Hugs n peace ~D |
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