Part Deux: I'll Charm You Yet.

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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-06-04 11:49 PM

Perhaps I am in love,
with the idea
of being in like with you.
But it's well worth
the price I might pay,
every payday
purchasing an excuse
to stall and talk to you.

So interesting are you,
a faucet
dripping smiles.
Each splashes
as it hits the shower floor.
Explodes into multiple laughs
that I share
with only myself,
and your memory.

The consistent tapping
of water on ceramic,
whispers harmless lovers secrets
that I ought to share with you
but cannot.

Not yet.

________________________________________________

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2009-06-04 11:54 PM

nothing fills the heart faster than anticipation

very nice

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-06-05 06:08 AM

Haha -- Wise words, Monsieur Rex.

Thanks for the read, sah!

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2009-06-05 09:06 AM

You could always do the bird of paradise mating dance, I hear women are awfully impressed by that.

Enjoyed your write, remember, patience is a virtue.

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-06-05 11:18 AM

My Dear Kaoru...

Thank you for the kind words. I'm a pretty patient guy.

I usually do the chicken dance. Bird of Paradise is a bit advanced for me.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2009-06-05 01:00 PM

I guess that can be sexy too if you add in a couple moves of flair. Good luck.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-06-05 01:31 PM

quote:
Explodes into multiple laughs
that I share
with only myself,
and your memory.

Beautifully said! You are doing great!

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2009-06-05 01:47 PM

Kaoru... I'll break out the leather thong that I finished bedazzling yesterday. I'm sure that ought to do the trick.

Margo... Thanks very much ma'am.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

8 posted 2009-06-05 02:40 PM

thats a interesting way of putting it to be in like with you, pretty clever piece.

never really thought of it like that.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2009-06-05 06:04 PM

Fanksh. I try.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2009-06-10 01:32 AM

Paul and ______ sittin' in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Pay me a dollar and I'll go away and leave you alone. Honest.

Good poem ... you made me smile.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

11 posted 2009-06-15 11:28 PM

You rock allaboo

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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