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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-06-04 12:10 PM

Griselda’s been dancing
down at the strip club ever
since she got her working papers.

After the first couple of nights,
she made a promise to herself
that she would never do
alcoholic beverages.

All the drunken louts
with their pudgy hands
trying to grab for her
made her rather sick.

It was a major turn off
that left a lasting impression.

Even after she married Bones,
she never touches the stuff.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-04-2009 12:46 PM).]

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

1 posted 2009-06-04 07:58 PM

A wise choice indeed,
no need for dancing lesson's,
just comes natural, enjoyed,

Bloodline

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-06-04 09:34 PM

Thanks dear Bloodline,

For your kindness in commenting on my poem.

I'm pleased that you agree with Griselda. I'm pleased that the poem worked that way for you. My present girlfriend used to dance, and won't drink for the same reason.

Love Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-04-2009 11:03 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-06-09 02:08 PM

Being groped by a bunch of drunks would certainly be a deterrent to drinking! *S* I like Griselda's strength! *S*

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-06-09 02:41 PM

Thanks dear Suthern,

Yes, it seems to work that way.

Griselda says hello.

Love Bobby

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-06-09 06:43 PM

your poems are so gritty...in a good way!

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-06-10 08:21 AM

Thanks dear Brneyedgrly,

It's great to see you here.

I'm pleased that you found my poem gritty. Someone has to do it.

Thanks for reading, and for your kind words.

Love Bobby

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2009-06-10 10:12 PM

Yes Griselda does sound like a lady of

virtue Bobby, good luck to Bones.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2009-06-12 10:10 AM

Thanks Lindsay,

Yes, Griselda's way cool.

Bobby

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