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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Here's the boxes--wanna go? Yes, I know that they are flat. You have to insert A to B and C is down with that? Don't forget to pack your cake-- we don't want a bite of it. You're gonna need it for the road and if you think we're fulla shhhhhhhhhhhh.... Take the posters down as well we have plans for theater... A mallet knocks one wall between and we'll have the best of both worlds, between the walls of us. Little runway lights for trust is more than we have now. So go. I got you some good books-- great reading for a greyhound bus, and twist that knife that you have thrust between us, just a wee bit harder...OW. Now tell me--do you feel betrayed? The A folds into B...begin. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ouch so real I can feel multiple layers of frustration after inserting A into B, just C what happens |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh man. *smile* Now I ask you, do you think someone who can't put together a moving box is ready to take on the world? *shaking my head* Thanks for reading, Kace.  |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
I love the music and the cadence, sort of between the eyes and through the heart, Bloodline |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
These same days are on my horizon ~ not a happy thought |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Whoa, that was something deep. I could feel every word and the knife, good poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
For those able to take on the world, there MUST be someone to put together the moving box, the heck with it! Great job! Love, Margherita  |
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