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Slow Heat |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Shaded beneath the evergreens the sunlight dapples through the eaves where shadows shimmer shifting the sunlight that slants across the leaves. Leaning into the curve of branches unfolding catching the rays in a warm embrace savoring the magical moments that simmer in the slow heat. Cascading in the shadows of dusk before the day retreats behind twilight's curtain pastels veil the night diffusing the skyline in blue rhapsodies. ~*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gosh this is another gorgeous write from you, Blue. The images just pop in my mind so vividly! Enjoyed. M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy, you always did have that special lean into the music way about you!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, every line was exquisite! IWIHWT (I wish I had written that!!!!) You have eloquetnly ~ and VERY poetically ~ put into words what I have so often witnessed and experienced.   Love & Light and a big hug! Linda  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have noticed how the evenings at dusk here in Cali can hold such heat, thought I was the only one sweating, lol!! Word for word, you. Ct |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
BluesS - I liked this. Slow heat often warms longer like this poem does in the mind. Namyh |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - very vivid images when read. Nice write... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is truly beautiful poetry, singing the wonders of trees showered with dappled light from the warmth of the golden sun. What a gorgeous write, bluesy gal. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is an absolutely beautiful poem, BluesSerenade. You are a wonderful poet. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Rhapsodies of a view so enchanting, like cool stream water running through playful fingers of a Poet's dreams, Bloodline |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have become quite a fan of your poetry, Blues. Another excellent write from you. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you, so so much~ |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Blues - I can feel that evening breeze evaporating the day's dampness from my skin... mmmm... time for that glass of cabernet! Thoroughly enjoyed this! Indigo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cheers Indigo!! Thank you~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Heat in your words sounds just so desirable. Dear Lori, you caught the atmosphere masterfully. Love, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all for your encouraging replies. It is folks like you who make this place so special. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
superb imagery ... grand-fine writing! MUCH applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
ooooooohhhhhh....... I love this! Absolutely beautiful images! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bluesy!!!! Dang girl, what a pure TREAT to read you again, and when you sing the melodies of nature, my gosh, I see the scenes unfold right in front of my eyes. I've so missed reading you hon!! Hugs n peace ~D "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Many thanks~ |
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