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Open Poetry #44
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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
0 posted 2009-06-07 03:06 PM




Up in arms
and out of breath
Running, skipping
cheating death
They'll unlock
the iron door
Cross the line
and kiss the floor
Feels the heat
upon his skin
Never to
go back again
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-06-07 04:47 PM

Yo dear Tina,

You said it, never to go back again.

This is a very effective picture/poem combination.

Love Bobby
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-06-07 06:19 PM

I can't even imagine the elation one must feel.
Your title says it all!!

I enjoy reading your poetry, Tina~
TinaTrivett
Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
3 posted 2009-06-10 10:11 AM

Thank you both
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