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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
 ArtistHoward David Johnson The day wanes my love as I await, Only the form of your body calms My desire. Wistful eyes, longing, gaze Unseeing. Listless yearning heart psalms Passion’s past. Come my bliss. Without your soul by mine I faint Helpless for your solace embrace. Unmoved since your last kiss, my lips Pulse a soundless whisper. Race To me! Else my spirit disappear! Darling, no taste upon my tongue Or scent of sweet perfume weakens My being as the lightest touch of you. Ecstasy is the rhythm that begins In my lovers bosom when you smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Ecstasy is the rhythm that begins In my lovers bosom when you smile" That must be some spectacular smile. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Bloodline, This is a lovely poem/picture combination. It's great to see someone go classical. Love Bobby |
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Marcia MT Junior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 36California USA |
Wonderful poem the reading of which left me "breathless". BRAVO! |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Midnitesun, thank you for such a sweet comment, guess my pen got a bit carried away, Robert E. Jordan, always enjoyed the classics, thank you, |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Marcia MT, a breathless Bravo? Wado, thank you and I'm blushing, the picture just "spoke" to me, smiles, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is deliciously soft and sweet, kind of melts in your mouth!!  What a treat to read bloodline, I am so enjoying your poetry. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A wonderful "BREATHLESS" poem! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your passion flows well, Sunflower of the Cherokee welcomes you to PIP.... May your spirit soar upon the mighty winds, touching the hearts of others with words.. ~ARH |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bloodline...a pleasure to watch the panting at this window |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, there are those smiles that have it all in them! This has a very nice rhythm and conveys deep emotions. Love, Margherita |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Yes,it is great to see someone go classical. I totally agree. Well done , sir/madam. ps: have you been eating Byron pills? If you have, they seem to be working. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
BluesSerenade, thank you for expressing your enjoyment, Oklahoma Rose, a sigh of thanks, A Romantic Heart, wado and I will take your words to heart, Dark Stranger, and a thank you in return, Margherita, so nice of you, many thanks, Osprey, thank you and i naturally enjoy poetry by the Muse, JamesMichael, kind of you to say so, Bloodline |
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