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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2009-05-27 03:29 PM





~wopila tanka~

words that roll off the tongue
in gentle rhythmic harmony,
spreading smiles across the miles
when you speak these words
that mean

~many thanks~

for even the tiniest kindness
and gentle gesture
of caring and sharing
amplifies the magical melody
of friendship
in every note that floats
upon the four winds

~wopila tanka~

from me to you

for taking time to read my thoughts,
and to reply

but more importantly,
for taking time
to bare your soul
as you share your thoughts
through poetry and prose

~wopila tanka~


© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-05-27 03:51 PM


And a wopila tanka right back atch'ya midnite.

lol

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-05-27 04:08 PM


Yo dear Kacy,

You get a feather for this one.

Love Bobby

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3 posted 2009-05-27 04:21 PM


Midnitesun,
Your light brightens our darkest nights and beams even brighter in our hearts.

Wopila Tanka, barely comes close to the feelings we have for your tallents that you share with us.

Love,
Tracey.



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4 posted 2009-05-27 04:35 PM


C Guy, wopila tanka
Bobby, thanks, I love feathers!
Tracey, I'm humbled by that generous reply.

Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-05-27 06:04 PM


You are such a wonderful poet, my friend. And, very talented. Thank you for sharing.
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6 posted 2009-05-27 06:06 PM


Kacy, what wonderful balm for the spirit!  You are an absolute marvel!  In the midst of your hardships, you still spread such love, healing, comfort and joy!  Thank YOU!!!

This is one of the most beautiful and altruistic poems I have ever read, even by the standards of YOUR poetry and definitely my latest favourite of gems!

Owl

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7 posted 2009-05-27 06:08 PM


Sue, thank you for such kind words, your comments mean a lot to me.
Diana, thanks for visiting and for your forever-kindness and sharing.

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8 posted 2009-05-27 06:38 PM


wakan tanan kici un
le mita cola  
hecheto welo (!) ...


serious applause for this 'penning' !!

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9 posted 2009-05-27 07:16 PM


The Great Spirit or Great Mystery (God) is Wakan Tanka.

Does your comment roughly translate to:

"My friend, the Great Spirit would enjoy this fine write"???

I'm afraid my Lakhota vocabulary is quite limited, and would have to call friend Kevin Locke, Lakota hoop dancer and a Baha'i.

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10 posted 2009-05-27 07:56 PM


May i say Wado, Cherokee for
thank you, I can see the elders
around the ceremony fire smiling,

Bloodline

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11 posted 2009-05-27 08:01 PM


Thank you very much for that reply, Bloodline.

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12 posted 2009-05-27 11:11 PM



OIHA KE WANIL WAKATAHA  O IYOKIPI

Um, I hope I didn't say anything naughty.

(I have a knack.)

I think it translates,

"Forever, from on high, lovely!"



That would be you, darlin'.

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13 posted 2009-05-28 06:24 AM


LOL, Karen, I can't tell if that was naughty or nice, but it sounds lovely when I try to sing it.

Maybe we should do a whole thread with thank you's in different languages? I once posted one that said "Peace" in several languages.

Anyone up for the challenge of posting a "Thank You" thread?

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14 posted 2009-05-28 11:42 AM


whoopa tie yi kewl..

(cowboy for "dug it")

OwlSA
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15 posted 2009-05-28 12:14 PM


I didn't sing what Karen said, but it sounded beautiful when I said it, as with what Bruce said.  You see what you started Kacy?  What a flow of such beautiful words!  Wopila tanka, Kacy.

Owl

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16 posted 2009-05-28 12:26 PM


Wopila tanka ... wopila tanka ... what a wonderful sound these words have. Wow and that "tanka" sounds similar to "danke" in German.

But the most enticing sound that your poem emits is the echo of your heart and soul. You dance through life in beautiful awareness and let us share in the dance.

Grazie!

Love,
Margherita

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17 posted 2009-05-28 12:38 PM


an' here's a drap o' kindness tae ye tae, hen.
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18 posted 2009-05-28 01:32 PM


applause for this poem and its touching mesage, the sounds are great too.

regards

yann

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19 posted 2009-05-28 06:37 PM


DS, LOL, ya gotta love that cowpoke talk!
Diana, grin, thanks, lady!
Margherita, danke, for your reply!
Osprey, smiling here, thanking you.
Yann, for that kind comment, thanks!

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