Open Poetry #44 |
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By Chance |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
By Chance In every whisper of the wind Every freight train dream bearing down eternity’s track Just as the perennial blooms of grass emerge gratefully to dance Cherished are the wishes waiting at the threshold of time Certainty is a cool drink, thirsted in bewitching hours This world sleeps silently to the tunes of devotion Deaf now, to the currents crafted solidly in storms Here, I dangle in serpentine pose Every secret has been spoken to the underside of leaves To be heard in the hearts of those intuitive and open mouthed Deepest wishes, tucked between the cleaves of sun and moon There, they hold fast to the source of creation in kindness So this I speak to you my love A fundamental truth that steers one deliberate path Attentively, I fan the flames of deepest red and blue to boil Without you, my inner world would be silent and dark Just by chance, that sunrise would carry the rain Copyright Kkh 5/27/09 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there are so many lovely aspects to this that I hardly know where to start...the imagery? surely surreal...the composition of the words? par excellence...the passion? breatheable...but, my favorite part has to be this: "Every secret has been spoken to the underside of leaves To be heard in the hearts of those intuitive and open mouthed" ...standing in awe (with mouth agape) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is so penetrating and so deep TD. I feel the words coarse through me as if they were written for me. That, is a true gift. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Love, Eric |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thirsted in bewitching hours.... Excellent. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Kathleen! |
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