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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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back to the gypsy sigh of highways again they are the only women I have really known though some were too fast around the curves to ever taste the moments of our salvation and others were slow motion notion bends but the u-turns were always lovely on those some morning after yesterdays when I still wore their perfume as a memory I never slowed for the crossroad cautions that blinked a warning to hurry shoe blind men as if they could hear the flashing of light when it whispers from behind a face down lover their gravel was delicious in my wounds and the moans of their shoulders seductive when strummed by something sinful without rules their music is always sweeter than their seams and the salt of their brims bares their healing _____________ daark (owgish highway stuff) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I never slowed for the crossroad cautions" Smiling at you. You love challenges. This is a superb write, daark. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Sick write... I'll never understand how you create such elegant styling. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms midnite. You bless me lady!! ____________ Viking friend, humble thanks! |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
You weave a cohisive randomness that sings poetry like precious sighs, Bloodline |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
but the u-turns were always lovely on those some morning after yesterdays when I still wore their perfume as a memory ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Awww geeeez, sometimes you just catch my breath and hold it. Love this, and all that!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I suspect that you could get a biker club to not only listen as you gave poetry readings, but thump their chests in appreciation. That thought amuses me, but I truly can see how it could happen--with you. You are elegant, as it's been said, but you write it real.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
would love to be the sidewalked you scraped just so youd lick my wounds |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bloodline, thank you very much ____________ ms bluezy, thanks babe, you smile me _____________ ms serene...huh? speak up babe, the pipes are a bit loud in here...you said something about breeding pottery? (thanks special lady) ______________ ms inki...would be lovely to skin you up just a bit...slowly..thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... and along with the perfume there was the black dust clinging to your cheeks and that's when you took that picture of yours!  It's fun to see you in this role as a god of the highways. A god gifted with an uncommon talent for words that ride emotions like Paganini's bow on his violin. Love, Margherita  |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Your understanding of women is only surpassed by your feel for a bike on the road. Ride on, Dark One. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..humble thanks lady friend.. ___________ oz..thanks for the review, I doubt I will ever know either as well as I should/could/would want to. |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
quote: ~ omg that rocks! DS, you are a class act, my friend have been a fan of your pen for years, and this poem is a wonderful example of why *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms SA..thanks lady for the eyes here |
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