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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

0 posted 2009-05-21 03:10 PM

Moonlight dreams

The distant sea is dreaming
In the soft and starry night
Mild shoreward winds are sighing
In the silver spangled light

A tender voice is whispering
Across the lonely space
Sighing in the darkness
Of dreams in our embrace

Spellbound waves are dancing
To the music of the stars
And twinkling on the tapestry
The fiery face of Mars

Glowing as the moonlight
This precious hour brings
And flecks of dazzling colour
To the homing seagull's wings

At last when dawn approaches
The sun wakes up the day
Spilling gold and smiling
As it wanders on its way....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-05-21 06:15 PM

Beautiful and serene! It conveys great harmony, dear Heart2Heart.

Love,
Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2009-05-21 07:01 PM

nice

Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

3 posted 2009-05-21 07:34 PM

I'll rest with you a moment, and feel your poem. But, rush with me, landward, as the seas and the wind take hold, on the west coast. Spells are cast in your poem

Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

4 posted 2009-05-21 10:47 PM

There is something very special about the sun rise. I love to get up early and watch it. Here in the west(Idaho) we watch it come up over the mountains, some times there are pink and gold clowds.

Your poem is very inspiring. Thanks.

Billie C.

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

5 posted 2009-05-21 11:46 PM

I could lie right here, on the bed of your words, and dream of "silver spangled light".
Adored,
H

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

6 posted 2009-05-22 01:36 AM

That's a lovely comment, much obliged Margherita.
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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7 posted 2009-05-22 01:37 AM

.. and I appreciate your nice reply vandana !
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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8 posted 2009-05-22 01:38 AM

Now isn't that the loveliest of comments one would ever care to receive, thanks osprey for your reply :-)
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

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9 posted 2009-05-22 01:39 AM

Thanks for your most inspiring reply as well Billie. Yes I love dawn and sunrise as well, my best time of day.

Rex
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since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

10 posted 2009-05-22 12:30 PM

My kind of poetry...very well done.

Regards.

Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

11 posted 2009-05-26 09:02 PM

A tender voice is whispering
Across the lonely space
Sighing in the darkness
Of dreams in our embrace

Moonbeams do that to ya,
lovely verse Heart2Heart,

Bloodline

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

12 posted 2009-06-01 02:33 AM

Rex, thank you, nice to share your style of poetry. We've got to keep dreaming :-)
~Heart2Heart~

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

13 posted 2009-06-01 02:34 AM

Indeed they do Bloodline, thanks for stopping by :-)
Heart2Heart

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