Open Poetry #44 |
Rememberance |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
If blood be life, If life be breath Inspired in strife, 'Fore gentle death. The many cares That scoured my hands, Rememb'rance bears The timeless sands. And lost in woe At break of day, My love she'll know; A rose I'll lay. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - I found this writing to flow gracefully when reading. Nicely done... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I read this a few times, and it sounded really great aloud. Enjoyed! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, Luke! Love, Margherita |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
How could she not, beautifully written, Bloodline |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A great poem of rememberance, It just shows how big your heart really is, She would have loved this poem.... My heart aches for yours as you remember her... All My Love... ~ARH |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ a tender remembrance your words fall softly from the tongue, my friend a pleasure to read you *hugs* Sasha xx |
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