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Osprey
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0 posted 2009-05-21 09:13 PM



Pussy teased the birds.
On Pussy's headstone , they wrote:
No- not the eagle.

© Copyright 2009 Osprey - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2009-05-21 09:29 PM


~Grin
A truly foul outcome for the puss.

Osprey
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2 posted 2009-05-21 09:51 PM


Thank you TD. Did I detect the naissance of a pun in your reply? (smiles)
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2009-05-21 09:53 PM


Have a thing for eagles.
Nice smile

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-05-22 12:57 PM


Oh, dear! Poor Puss!

An eagle's beak and talons would be enough to scare me off! Hummingbirds are more my speed!


EA


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5 posted 2009-05-22 06:10 AM


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6 posted 2009-05-22 07:00 AM


I shot the bluejay
with the hose--
damned bird, it flew away!




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7 posted 2009-05-22 10:58 AM


Oh God, that made me laugh - poor pussy.  My cats are inside cats just for that reason.  

Thank you for making me snort my coffee.

A

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8 posted 2009-05-22 12:11 PM


Makes me want to pet my cats and remind them why they have to stay inside!
Margherita
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9 posted 2009-05-22 01:38 PM


Very effectful haiku! Of course I am sorry for the cat. The number makes the power!

Love,
Margherita

ziad
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10 posted 2009-05-23 06:40 PM


That made me laugh... really brilliant.

And i don't usually like haiku's.

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2009-05-23 11:54 PM


Enjoyed your wit, Osprey.
                Ida

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Gaia
12 posted 2009-05-24 07:39 PM


hilarious!
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13 posted 2009-05-24 11:31 PM


touche'
Bloodline
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14 posted 2009-05-28 09:31 PM


Inventive and what brings
a smile touches the heart,
smiling,

Bloodline

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