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Open Poetry #44

Bones Turns Sullen

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-05-20 10:18 PM

As often happens
with people in the trade,
Bones has his sullen moments.

If the truth were known,
Bones just plain turns sullen.

He’s standing out
Front and Girard,
trying to catch a ride.

He’s out there
with Marika’s little brother
Lajcsi,

Bones even has little Lajcsi
in a rotten mood.

Marika comes on by,
notices the boys
are kind of down.

“Yo, youse two,
come on over ere,
I wanna speak wit youse.

What’s wit da sour mush,
youse ain’t gonna score big dat way.

Put a smile on yur mugs,
or I’ll come over der
en smack ya silly.”

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-05-21 02:33 AM

Thanks Bobby for recalling the importance of friendship and relationships in a well crafted and appropriate poem.

regards

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-05-21 06:10 AM

Oh, yes the attitude! Marika, being a girl, of course understood this perfectly and gave you a reminder.

But then, no one is immune to sullen moments ... so good when friends are around who know the way of restoring a smile. A threat of smacks equals to a tender caress sometimes in the outcome.

Nice work.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-05-21 10:28 AM

Thanks Yann,

Yes, what you say is true about friends. Thanks for your kind comment.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-05-21 10:31 AM

Thanks dear Margherita,

Yes, Marika was always a very wise, and beautiful, young lady. We all miss her.

Love Bobby

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