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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-18 10:15 AM



trying to get out of the door
and the sound of your pantyhose talking
to your busy legs
keeps interrupting your smiles

as the rest of the woman of you
wants to climb some quiet and tall luxury
and leave tattoos inside her heart
that have wet ink for eternity

so you pet the cat instead
and keep your sanity monday
in a spare change can behind the door
that you can open sometimes alone

just to spend some of your time crazy

_____________


daark  (forbidden)


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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2009-05-18 10:28 AM


... and, Mister, just how do you know about the can behind the door.  Futhermore, even I(!)don't believe your definition of a tuffit.  Rubber teeth!  Ha on you!

Oh, and this poem is beautiful as always.  Just the right mixture of sensual and beautiful.  And Ta Da - I have a crumpet.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-05-18 12:28 PM


ms ali-san..

I have a crumb pet too...but I still have to feed it big bowls of dinosaur pellets to keep it from eating the frog statue, thanks for the read babe

suthern
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3 posted 2009-05-19 12:50 PM


so you pet the cat instead
and keep your sanity monday
in a spare change can behind the door
that you can open sometimes alone

just to spend some of your time crazy


This
is

P
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R
F
E
C
T

... and I'm claiming it for my library! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-05-21 05:37 AM


quote:
and leave tattoos inside her heart
that have wet ink for eternity



What makes your poems uniquely appealing, besides their poetic superiority, is your deeper knowledge of a woman's heart.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2009-05-21 07:19 AM


ms suthern..you bless me..thank you


_____________

ms mar, thanks babe!!

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