Open Poetry #44 |
Twilight's Sonnet |
Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
When evening's fingers gather in the day When far is near and dear is very far I would be close to you though miles away For in my thoughts you are that shining star So warm with wonder, bright with love you are Could I but keep you thus upon the strands Who does not let this kinship mark nor mar A faithful love that ever understands That spirits linger on Iona's sands Where timeless dreams become our hearts' desire To walk not talk through lines but to hold hands Then sit in peace in twilight's waning fire In harmony that always lets us share The loving moments that show we do care |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Then sit in peace in twilight's waning fire" A lovely poem, and a lovely way to end a day. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Truly beautiful! Welcome to Pip! Makes me want to linger in the scenery ... Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
So warm with wonder, bright with love you are... my favorite line! ~ARH |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you kindly for stopping by Midnitesun, appreciate your reply. Heart2Heart |
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Twi Junior Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 22the Underworld |
Very nice, very nice. You did a good job. §Bella§ |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
ARH and Twi, thanks so much for stopping by. This is a Spenserian sonnet. Rhyming scheme ABAB BCBC CDCD EE. Heart2Heart |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Some tell me the sonnet is history. Me? I believe it is holds a timeless format; as you so eloquently prove. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful write. Welcome to Passions |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
This is really lovely. Enjoyed, H |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Osprey, thanks for comment. I agree with you, the sonnet is classic. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks for nice reply ThisDiamond, and I do appreciate your welcomes to this lovely and friendly site. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Unboundpoetess, I am happy you think so, thanks ever so much for your comment. Heart2Heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This entire poem is exceptionally lovely. "When evening's fingers gather in the day" ~ What a novel, poetic, and creative way of describing a twilight sky. EA |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Heart2Heart, In twilight time you sing with rhyme, no picture needed your poems conpleted, Bloodline |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Earth Angel and Bloodline I appreciate your very kind replies. Thank you. Heart2Heart |
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