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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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One morning at the break of dawn As filtered sun beams touched the lawn A single whiff of fragrant breeze Brought silent peace beneath the trees Then reaching down, the golden sun Unfolded petals one by one And in its sweet simplicity A rose looked up and smiled at me Elizabeth Santos |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Sweet. I love roses. I rescue them when I can. Nice write. Tracey |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I love roses. Especially, the yellow ones. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such gorgeous surroundings for your poem, the filtered light is the perfect backdrop. There's so much to like!!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Elizabeth, I like your use of end rhymes in this very nice poem. Love Bobby |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
From a rose, a rose so sweet! |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Normally I despise cheery poetry, but I actually liked this one. Nice job. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elizabeth - my favorite flower is a red rose. Truly of romance, caring, and love... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is lovely, Elizabeth. Ida |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I like rose poems, and like Elizabeth Sansos poetry. Yep, I liked. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Simply beautiful. |
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