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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-05-20 11:03 AM



During three days,
we visited like faithful tourists
the Yellowstone church ,
natural churches are the ones
in which we can meet God ,
we walked along the wooden footbridges
that circle Bluebell pools,
Surging Spring and other springs
spattered with warm colored joys.
was there some ghost whales blowing
under the recalcitrant surfaces ?
People wandered and laughters
sprayed all over blue sprinkles of
musing waters and spectral drops,
The sun lulled childish rainbows,
everywhere around us
smiling springs, singing springs,
joking springs, hoping springs,
deserting springs, playing springs
shared their feelings with elegance.

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2009-05-20 01:35 PM


Sounds like sheer bliss and you described it beautifully.  Much enjoyed.   I especially liked the following lines  
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musing waters and spectral drops,
The sun lulled childish rainbows,
everywhere around us
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Heart2Heart
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2 posted 2009-05-20 02:12 PM


I know what you are talking about when you refer to Bluebell Pools.  A lovely poem and delight to read.
Heart2Heart

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-05-20 04:06 PM


Yo Yann,

Thanks for the nice tour of Yellowstone Park.  I was never there.

Bobby

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-05-20 04:10 PM


Outstanding imagery, Yann. Thank you very much for taking me by the hand, allowing me to immerse myself in such timeless beauty.

This gem is definitely a 'library' keeper for this reader!

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-05-20 06:47 PM


quote:
The sun lulled childish rainbows,
everywhere around us
smiling springs, singing springs,
joking springs, hoping springs,
deserting springs, playing springs
shared their feelings with elegance.


And with elegance and mastery you share your impressions with us, dear Yann.

Blissful write!

And I agree with your reflections on God's presence in Nature.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-05-21 02:11 AM


Thanks Mark for the kind comment, this place surely deserves it and in summer is a really nice painting.

yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-05-21 02:14 AM


Thanks heart2heart for sharing a lovely comment. Yes I came, I saw and I won this uniqueness of Yellowstone.

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2009-05-21 02:15 AM


Thanks Bobby for sharing this comment and reading the poem. USA is so vast you can't visit it all.

yann

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-05-21 02:16 AM


Hello Kacy, this is so kind, your comment is as beautiful as the park and its springs, I wish I will go back someday and visit it again.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2009-05-21 02:18 AM


Yes Indeed Margherita this is a lovely place and God used his mastery here...It was such a pleasure to read your comment.

best wishes

yann

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2009-05-21 09:33 AM


Bluebell Pools...That just sounds magical,
yann.
                                  Ida

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2009-05-21 01:54 PM


Yann, what a sparkling, effervescent, joyful, picturesque, and thoroughly delightful piece of writing!!! LOVED it!!!

BIG HUG ~ HUGE Smiley Face!!!

Linda

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