Open Poetry #44 |
Louise's Secret |
Marcia MT Junior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 36California USA |
I often wonder whatever happened to Harry. The first one you thought about when planning a gathering, the life of every party, the one you could count on to dance with a lonely lady, or bolster a fallen ego. There isn’t a woman in town whose heart didn’t skip at the sight of him and the men to be like him how they in vain did aspire. Then came the night when Harry met Louise. She in a backless dress of red and five-inch stiletto heels, coming through the door, chandellier earrings swaying walking to the music’s beat with a think you can handle it attitude the scent of Obsession wrapped around her like a seductive fog overpowering the stench of overflowing ashtrays and spilled whiskey. Harry froze on the spot, charmingly debonair as always but with mouth agape he was speechless at the sight. No one was surprised when once compusure was regained he walked up to her and led her to the dance floor without a word and she walked into his arms as if that's where she belonged. I often wonder but only they know what happened then. Soon after meeting they took off for parts unknown and the irresistible charmer Harry was never heard from again. It’s been rumored Louise had inherited a small fortune, from a father who had paid her little mind, and Harry was one who just got by, but how nobody knows. Louise came back to town awhile back dressed in what for her is conservative attire, her Louis Vuitton luggage looking as tattered as she does. Her hair once her crowing glory now shows a tad of gray, it’s lost its glorious sheen and lays limply on her pale shoulders. Day after day she stays within her dwelling, doesn't speak with anyone, has her simple fare groceries brought in, caretakers for the palatial property come and go and her porch light stays on all night. On rare occasion she's spotted on her balcony her head down, back to the world a more solitary figure this town has never seen. It appears that whatever happened to Harry is Louise’s take it to the grave secret, something we’ll always think and speculate about, but none of us will ever really know. Because Louise, well. . . Louise isn't talking anymore. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I read this earlier, in search of my own mind for a decent reply. I really enjoyed this work, the ending punched me right in the gut. Very interesting and well done piece here, thank you for sharing it. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is one of those heartbreaking mysteries of life - it kind of reminds me of the book, Jamaica Inn, by Daphne DuMaurier. I am so glad that you shared this poem - I am left wondering ... and feeling a bit sad for Louise. Alison |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marcia MT - this writing had me spellbound right up to the ending. Great writing... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
What a sad story, Marcia. You ae a wonderful writer. I enjoyed reading this. I wonder what did happen to Harry? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What an engaging read. You are quite the story-teller! ~ I wanted to 'hear' the whole story! Great writing!!! EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Most interesting write, Marcia. Ida |
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