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A pin drop broke the silence
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A pin drop broke the silence |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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When a pin drop broke the quiet The book of truths was heard That broke hard years of diet Where silence was preferred Then slowly came some talking And thoughts that cross each mind To then the nights of walking With what had been behind Those years of feeling lonely As walls of silence grew Where bitter took the only True love I ever knew But then a light from up above From somewhere passed the blue Showed again a glimpse of love And feelings that were new And sparks then came to fire Such warmth to fill the heart Again ones all desire With life anew to start A pin drop broke the silence And walls they fell away The sun is warm and giving now I thank that sound each day |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
walls are broken one brick at a time |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, What a wonderful poem. Sometimes, pins have the strength of wrecking balls. I hope this happy message is about you. I have missed you and am always smiling when I see you have come in and shared a poem. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
1slick_lady good to see you here, one brick at a time indeed, they are never too strong to fall as the time is never too late, thank you for you comment and visit my friend. Dear Alison, lovely to see you here, I have lots of little pieces written but not much finished to share with you all, I hope to share more soon. Hope you have been well my friend and looking after yourself. Thanks for the visit. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Amazing what a pin can do - burst "it" or hold "it" together. Lovely poem. Helen |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Helen, thanks for your comment my friend, it is amazing what a pin can do, that is indeed a fact. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 dear Rick, this is quite simply a beautiful poem! love and hugs RDB xxBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Roniece, thanks for the visit my friend and comment, always lovely to see you here, have a wonderful day and take care. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Rick, this is a delightful write, showing an evolution that brought back life's gift of love. A pin drop can occur in many ways ... we must always listen. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the silence be forever gone as you bask in the warmth of a radiant sun!  So nice to see you posting again, dear Rick! Love and a hug, Linda  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...the sound of a pin is a marvel, and this caused a silent burn beneath my eyelids. I too hope all the pins and needles sewn into silence fall daily, beneath a winging heart Klassy |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita we must indeed listen and be prepared to hear its sound, good seeing you here my friend, thanks for the visit, take care. Dear Linda, it was nice to have something to post and share with my friends, good to have you comment, thanks heaps. Dear Klassy, I hope they do as well my friend, this was a great reply, good seeing you here, thanks for the visit. To you all my friends, again thank you so much for your replies, I hope it won't be too long and I will be back, enjoy all you do. Rick |
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