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to cross the waters |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
His sweet imploring vainly cries out to me. No, I dare not gaze upon those waters. I feel the mist and waves beckon me to venture out on tranquil shores. Yet his cries are fruitless. If I should drift on seas serene and cross the waters vast, Surely I would reach those happy shores - Or would I wander aimlessly and never find my home? His cries are constant, but soft. He almost persuades me. Gently he cries to bid me adrift. Shall I lift my eyes toward the one to whom he leads? Does he somehow know you're there? He almost persuades me. Almost. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Go for it! Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Nice write, Tracey. PS, The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am happy to see a new poem from you. It leaves me wondering if the shore is a good place to venture - or is it a case of appearances being deceptive. You give me something to puzzle over this morning. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I'm intrigued by this write. Some higher call maybe, a vocation ... who knows. Only in deep silence will you perceive total clarity about whatever asks for a decision. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hey girl, nice write...very intriguing...will have to study this so I can understand it better, or you could just whisper in an old man's ear the key to this one...love, Dad |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
nothing deeply disturbing, just homesick... read your poem then mine |
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