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Open Poetry #44

Life's Finest Hour

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-05-16 02:12 AM

What is alive in today?
but another hour to love you,
though my words could fray,
no one loves you as I do,

What exists in sleep?
but dreams of you surreal,
memories my heart shall keep,
deep is the love I feel,

When time has played,
as the setting of the sun,
my love never to have strayed,
your heart, I will have won!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (05-16-2009 03:27 AM).]

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-05-16 04:26 PM

You have my heart. This poem is gorgeous.

I love you.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

mini poet
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since 2000-02-06

Posts 56
Canada

2 posted 2009-05-16 06:15 PM

This is so beautiful.
I enjoyed reading it

SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09

Posts 74
USA

3 posted 2009-05-16 07:53 PM

your words are wonderful! Great writing!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2009-05-16 10:09 PM

this one's a beauty...nicely done

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-05-16 10:49 PM

Very nice...James

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2009-05-17 02:34 PM

Beautiful.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

7 posted 2009-05-17 02:53 PM

Very lovely.

Regards

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