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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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Houston, Texas

0 posted 2009-05-17 12:22 PM


Hell is what you could have done
and didn't!
Heaven is what you couldn't have done
and did!
Life is what you should have done
and couldn't!



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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-05-17 12:58 PM


Yo Rex,

I like this short poem.  It hits the nail on the head.

Bobby

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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2 posted 2009-05-17 02:10 PM


Bobby...

Thanks...glad you liked it, sometimes shorter is better.

Regards.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-05-17 02:28 PM


A lot said with a few words, Rex. Much to think about here.
                                  Ida

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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4 posted 2009-05-17 02:38 PM


Ida....

Thank you kindly, it is appreciated.

Regards.

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