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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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does the dawning sky make walls for sounds to capture the hollow of hooves in trotting jaunty as the mistress of mist abides her appointments and the purple breasted mountains at morrows brim do they know the orange mouths of morning without the tasteful residue of moon milk eves the wind there at her bounty's bosomed sail does it make love to the sea saliva'd canvas while it masters the burl of the masthead's moan and the ocean hand, grinder of salt into bone does it not count the grains as moments in time scattered across the lover's shorelined hem when she writhes the tides, bare knee'd to storm _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-13-2009 09:57 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am spellbound. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sensual nature gets me every time especially when you speak of my first love the shore |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady.. _______________ ms slick...our first love's are always mated it seems..the shore and sea, thanks lady!! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I think poetry is going to get me through the day today, but you're making me miss the sea... |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
From wonder to yes; captivating... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...the sea misses you too I suspect..thank you _______________ raindance, thank you for looking in |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"and the purple breasted mountains at morrows brim do they know the orange mouths of morning without the tasteful residue of moon milk eves" ...I love the imagery of these lines...so cool...so very, very cool |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks steavenr.. |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
this one kind of sweeps you away. Very nice D. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Oh,D~ These are rapture words Loosed, H |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spudd...thanks so much ______________ heather, thanks lady friend _______________ van, thank you so much |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, I feel like I am sharing sleep dreams when I read this. It's beautiful. quote: Spectacular writing. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..what is a spectacular..is that one of those things that waters the lawn and makes little spicket spicket spicket noises? thanks |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I copied first one line and then another... and another... and... *S* I love every line... this is absolutely wonderful!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thank you so much for your reads and comments |
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