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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-15 07:42 AM



or course you know I have imagined the gata
how she will be on her forbidden prowl
tempting the leather of me to stone shapes

how she will toy with imagination suggestions
and the burly girl of her will even moan perhaps
as she presses her woman skin taut in temptation

there will be shadows here and there
and she will wear just a part of them
over even less of her seduction

and there will be the story from that time
that she will pretend to have forgotten
but it is too late since she knows me by now

and the things that she did to my mind back then
when it was helpless and she was mostly proper
with just a hint of do you really like it

when I was bold enough to put it all in writing


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1 posted 2009-05-15 11:11 AM


Still bold,
still writing..

And I still die. ;-)

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2 posted 2009-05-15 11:29 AM


Hey D!

Each picture that you word paint fascinates me - and is tucked away in my mind gallery.

Yep, for real.

A

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3 posted 2009-05-15 12:23 PM


Loved it. "When I was bold enough to put it all in writing"
Way to tie it all together

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4 posted 2009-05-15 01:02 PM


the story of her
unfinished; the leather damp
memory lingers.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-05-15 02:29 PM


ms K...does the dying bother you
as long as it is very slow?  thanks lady friend

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ms ali-san, thank you for the wiggle on the window here

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slowfallaway, thank you so much


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ms indi..I do hope the story never ends really..and damp leather is my favorite kind of lissome, thanks babe

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6 posted 2009-05-15 10:06 PM


and there will be the story from that time
that she will pretend to have forgotten
but it is too late since she knows me by now

~*~

Is it too late? Does she really know you?
Or just the parts you share...?

Well done, Sir. Enjoyed this very much.


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-05-16 07:06 AM


ms sun...I doubt she knows me really...but sees my eyes sometimes and looks away..thanks babe
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8 posted 2009-05-17 06:42 AM


Be always bold enough, dear D., and bless us with your writings, such as this one!

Each of us is a universe in itself, but in exploring each other there lies so much charm, even if some veils will never lift.

dance of gata ... I love it, enticing with a touch of melancholy.

Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-05-17 07:02 AM


ms mar...thanks so much lady friend
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10 posted 2009-05-19 11:45 AM


and the things that she did to my mind back then
when it was helpless and she was mostly proper
with just a hint of do you really like it

Thank heavens for boldness and the writings it fueled. *S* Love this! *S*

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11 posted 2009-05-19 12:32 PM


thanks babe!!  you smile me
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