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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-05-12 09:50 AM



monotonously apparitional
catoptrical as sand spurry
silly spilled and now windless
on windmill windows

windowbox windbreaks
windburned from windchill
where winter won another
wind chimed wind crime

wind cones swallow their salt
like words left wordless
vacum voiced vision viscosity
aeolian lyres lie their truth

silent in monotone appearance


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scribblenote: contemplation regarding the airspace between duel pane windows during cheer leading practice by the current administration



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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2009-05-12 10:40 AM


Windows, wind and cheerleaders. Can't really ask for much more than that.
suthern
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Louisiana
2 posted 2009-05-12 10:47 AM


You are one of the few who can make me reach for a dictionary... and not even mind the effort. *G*
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
3 posted 2009-05-12 10:54 AM


Ms K, thanks for the nod


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Ms suthern, sometimes I fall off of one, grin. Thanks babe!!

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2009-05-12 12:48 PM


Now try reading it aloud while eating crackers. LOL  Excellent expression and particulary liked the water spout.  
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-05-12 01:53 PM


I see you have a silly satyrical side as well as the seriously sensuous one! lol


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Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-05-12 01:53 PM


mark..thanks amigo!!
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
7 posted 2009-05-12 02:29 PM


i love your aliteration
its groovy

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2009-05-12 03:07 PM


Ms Ea. Thanks so much lady.
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Thanx inki. You smile me

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