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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2009-05-12 02:49 PM



Clear Vision

I wrapped you
in cellophane
pasting the transparency
across the sky
and every time
I need you
all I have to do
is look up

"I'm so hard to handle
I'm selfish and I'm sad."
— Joni Mitchell



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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2009-05-12 03:01 PM


nice to have a pretty picture to rest your weary eyes on
suthern
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2 posted 2009-05-12 03:03 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, my friend... loved it! *S*
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2009-05-12 05:00 PM


omgggg... I love this!
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2009-05-12 05:03 PM


Love the vision.  
Oklahoma Rose
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Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2009-05-12 06:48 PM


That's a great idea. Think I will try that.
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2009-05-12 08:04 PM


I can't remember who said it first, but I heard it first from the lips of my love:

"How do you hold a bird in the palm of your hand?"

Become the sky...

*smile*

Thank you lovely lady, for reminding me of that.


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