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Open Poetry #44

Tracking Practice

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2009-05-10 01:29 AM

Tracking Practice

Rolling stones shackle gravity.
But misery loves company.
So pair me with weights.

Rouse with blinking stabs,
fresh and spoiled.
The ground shakes; the mind splits.
The Alpha and Omega axe swings.
Mute the thudding pain.

Life flowing; life spilled.
Salt and light etched in bare flesh.
Color blind movement, fearing nothing,
frees the flood.
Tears of Sweat that bleed like Blood.

Sighs and shouts; grunts and grins.
Boys slipping on wrinkled shirts.
Girls swapping groans for giggles.
Relief and ice
end practice.

5/6/09

zaxby
Junior Member

since 2009-03-05

Posts 48
California

1 posted 2009-05-10 06:51 PM

O.K I was in high school again geeking out the 300 meters sweat soaked tee shirt flapping in the breeze this piece brought that back home to me. nice work

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