Open Poetry #44 |
Forest Dawn |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Forest Dawn wilderness spring morning quiet moment out of time one butterfly dancing in a fickle breeze tin cup coffee far from home --- b. e. adams (3/27/2009) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me think of camping I am looking forward to doing that again... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Spring in the wilderness, I would love to see it again. Your poems are the next best thing, Bruce. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
fickle breezes and coffee... they go together |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed this vignette! ~ Sounds idyllic! Linda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Makes me think of camping too. Lovely images from so few words Bruce. Eric |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this was just a tiny impressionistic 'slice' of the 'life' of a field geologist (yes...camping indeed!) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Note to self: Get the tent ready! *S* Tent-camping may not give the best sleep... but dawn's beauty is worth the aches! LOL |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I enjoy reading slices like these,it is as it is,im sure we can all ''see it''in our minds eye, a postcard from your brain to ours..thank you for it.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Bruce, This is good John . |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I agree with John. Bruce, this is very good. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, this brings such wonderful dawn emotions. You know the magic of dawn and how you share it is our blessing. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 3000th post. I think you might not have realized that it happened with your most kind reply on my latest poem. It is such a pleasure to have you on Pip, dear Universalist! Love, Margherita |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Nice! How you've captured this lovely moment in place is a treat for the senses. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Congrats and beautiful poem ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
simply delightful, very enjoyable read. yann |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a pretty image! Much enjoyed. |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
ahh. Sweet. Nice snapshot. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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