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Temptress
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0 posted 2009-05-09 03:08 AM



the summer wind
settles on my soul,
its quiet fingers
releasing tension,
calling me
to play.
and I am usually wanton
on these kinds of days,
but for now
i will sail with the breeze
go happily on my way
and wait
for this touch of quiet
to leave me.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

© Copyright 2009 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2009-05-09 11:42 AM


quiet can be good

hi Jen
welcome back
and you brought a new pic with you
i have missed you and your poetry

Nan
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2 posted 2009-05-09 01:10 PM


Summer daze.. gotta love it, especially your way, Jenn..


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3 posted 2009-05-11 02:44 PM


Quiet certainly gifted you with a beautiful write. *S* It's good to see you posting! *S*
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4 posted 2009-05-11 02:46 PM


welcome home, love this, and its softness...

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I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2009-05-12 06:38 AM


"the summer wind
settles on my soul,
its quiet fingers
releasing tension,
calling me
to play."

love it Jen, and you're looking beautiful~~

M

Chalmette Guy
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6 posted 2009-05-12 09:54 AM


'Quietly' beautiful Temptress.

Another 'old timer' glad to see you back.

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7 posted 2009-05-12 10:39 AM


You know how they say, "Silence is Golden"? I believe that's true..but it can also drive you completely bonkers.

I liked this, it felt like a dream.

Temptress
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8 posted 2009-05-18 12:50 PM


Thanks everyone! hugs to every one of you. I can always find the support for writing that I need right here.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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