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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-05-08 08:49 PM


Your Indian skin
is interesting to an end,
a means to an end.

Your Indian skin
looks soft, may I touch it?
Don't look at me that way...

I know you
have thought this as well.
For this thought,
is a pleasant one, indeed.


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Have a good weekend, bonfire at my house. Come, get drunk, and be merry.  


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (05-10-2009 12:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-09 11:36 PM


I had to laugh at the "be marry" - was it a group marriage or was it one couple at a time?  Uh?

Like the poem too, VM.

A

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2 posted 2009-05-10 12:16 PM


"Don't look at me that way..."

That's one phrase I say quite often. Mostly because I'm up to no good most of the time and everyone knows it.

Good write.

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3 posted 2009-05-10 02:30 AM


*smile*

I do an americanized form of bindi.

(a brown sharpie)

nod

and chuckles at "be marry"

Are congratulations in order?

You're very cute, so it wouldn't surprise me.

Enjoyed.


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4 posted 2009-05-10 02:36 AM


heck yeah he's a cutie...

hope you stayed warm by the fire

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5 posted 2009-05-10 08:34 AM


Yo Paul,

A well placed Bindi is way cool.

Bobby

viking_metal
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6 posted 2009-05-10 12:04 PM


Ala-hoon... Thanks for stopping by. Everybody makes mistakes! BOO HOO!! Ha. Good to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed.

Kay... Thanks very much. I'm sure you're up to no good as often as the rest of us.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

viking_metal
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7 posted 2009-05-10 12:06 PM


Serenity... Fanksh for shtopping by, ma'am.

Mademoiselle SEA... Awwwww shucks. You're just the nicest, aren't ye?

Robbus... I agree. Thanks for reading, brohama.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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