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coventry in flip flops |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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oh godiva in your nearly gownless gauze how you tempt the demons to ride their dragons and to fly above the depth of your gaze where they are but leaves from darkened trees and you bash your bashful blush like china there at the morning stone's moaning comma from castle whim I know your somber when sighs are your souls saturation and then you consummate your ear wounds with ipod canned seal unsealed secretions you stir the trembling of the ripple ended waters and your thighs in dance skin are cricket wings how can sighs not seduce even the stones when you let the lady of your glamour get her knees wet in dawning meadows while she preys her knight to slay him slowly ______________ daark |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
to read you is to quench the thirst of desert parch |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To read you means to open and contemplate totally new poetic horizons. You are truly amazing, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms slick, you smile my man thoughts with your comments. ___________ Ms mar thank you for looking in this window. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You're making me want to go outside. Stop it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K..ok...maybe I should rename it to coveting trees in flip flops? thanks lady |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I love the way you have your way with words, stroking each syllable until you draw a sigh. H |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, I love the bash of bashful blush like china, and the lady of your glamour!! You are so in rare form, slick!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Slow is good... to read this slowly is to tremble beautifully within the gaze of coventry. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Hands up from me, Dark. I've tried, but you lost me somewhere just above her gaze. I must be in thick mode. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
UBP, thanks so much lady!! _________________ ms bluesy, thanks brat, you smile me still _______________ ms sun, thanks special one ________________ oz..modern day godiva..that is the "thin" of it |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Is she made of chocolate? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san... more caramel I suspect...thanks babe |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
oh husband I accept your tolls though scantily flawled yet beg you to repent your greed and accept my hairy cause. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spudd' and the knave that you bid to shave and leave your forest floored will he not weep with crave when only your steed trots the pave and the sire is your souls adore |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is all so good, but I found these lines speaking to me: "while she preys her knight to slay him slowly sighs are your souls saturation you stir the trembling of the ripple ended waters" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo!! |
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