Open Poetry #44 |
The Mirror Whispered True. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Pensively, he glanced into the Mirror hanging on the wall. The steady, pale blue-grey eyes held his gaze, and watched him, mockingly. As if, to say, "Don't fool yourself... there's nothing for you there at all; She is still young, you are too old; it's just a dream... this, you must see. And, even this... at most, is tenuous; you only know Her name. This sweet, imagined vision of Her, you hold close... Just misty words; You don't know what She looks like... where She lives... or, if, She feels the same towards you; there is little here, to cling to... this is quite absurd. For, you know, you may never meet... even, if She might want you. You can never whisper to Her, those soft, gentle words you write; There will never be a "You" and "Her"... you know these words ring true, And, this can only ever be just dreams and shadows in the night." The saddened, pale blue-grey eyes studied him... yet, choosing not to hear the truth, soft whispering in the flame he held for Her, so bright... so clear. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Age is just a number, but society has made it so much more than that. Good work. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Mirrors can be dream snatchers; don't let that wall-hung thief steal yours. Always a pleasure to read you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mirrors have been known to lie! ~ I certainly hope that mine does! Personally, I pay no heed to the age of a person (or to that of mine own self! lol). I have dated men 15 years older ~ and 15 years younger, than I! You pen with the best, dear Poet! Love & Light, Linda |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I agree love knows no age, color,....love is boundless... age is just a number... love is forever... ~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The saddened, pale blue-grey eyes studied him... yet, choosing not to hear the truth, soft whispering in the flame he held for Her, so bright... so clear. In choosing to not hear the truth, perhaps he's leaving a path open for a different truth... one that may have sad eyes dancing with joy. *S* This is absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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