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vandana
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0 posted 2009-05-08 11:26 AM





These Memories

I receive your love
When I recall your memories
I find your love
In a lost memory
When we learn to live
We learn to give
I face my love tomorrow
Where I watch the sun go by
I search your love
I find a peace in my heart
Each day
I sit and wondered about you
I watch days go on
Find your love
I search for answers
I search for questions
For love
Will find it
On my heart
Find it
Through these memories
Through these nights
I recall your name
I recall your memories
When your love reminds me......




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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-05-08 12:20 PM


Warm memories of those whom we have loved ~ and may continue to love ~ can keep us warm on even the coldest, and darkest, of nights.


Linda

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2 posted 2009-05-08 02:18 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

This is a very interesting, and well put together poem.

Love Bobby

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-05-08 09:02 PM


Love it, your ending is perfect and leaves so much to the imagination.  

Thanks for sharing your memories, vandana~

steavenr
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4 posted 2009-05-09 01:09 PM


a nice, thought-filled write...nice work...its effect is thought-provoking
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5 posted 2009-05-11 02:39 PM


I enjoyed this very much! *S*
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