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MissAnnonymous New Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 5Derbyshire, England |
Seventeen, Fear, Too scared to try. Collision? Scared I'll die. Expense, Not got a job. Impatience, Takes too long Eighteen, Curious Wondering. Affordable, Now working Freedom? Do what I want, when I want. Independence Don't rely on anyone Computer test Finish first Have a rest Easy Pass One Too fast approaching Too far to the right Not enough observing Fail Two Different place Too far to the left Too fast - It's not a race!! Fail Three Still, approaching too fast Confident Try again? No way, this is the last Fail Four The head of centre Strictest - oh no! Perfect Manouvre Pass Drive Buy new car Drive some more Nineteen Four and a half months A lifetime left Confidence Fast lanes Independence Wind in hair Far away places Freedom Driving, Love it. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Man, oh man. I wish I could love it too, and I'm almost 25! I have reasons, don't worry, but I've always wished for the wind in my hair... driving always spelled freedom to me. Great work. |
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