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Soon I Forgot
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Soon I Forgot |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Soon I Forgot Soon Seasons changes Into dusty storm Then came along the winter rain Soon I see clearly up above the sky The sky is turning into different seasons Soon I forgot I forgot Where were you? I have forgotten That you were here Loving me Now I have remembered That I was here I was lost in a memory As soon as the days changes As the time tell us How the ways used to be? Now I remembered the days About you and me I watch the days go by slowly As I watch the moment of love Soon I have forgotten every day How life used to be? I remember the ways Of the weather changes in time Soon I forgot |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Absolutely loved this Vandana...one of the best I've read by you. Much enjoyed. j. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes  this is one of my favorites from you!! A keeper for sure  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"Soon Seasons changes Into dusty storm Then came along the winter rain Soon I see clearly up above the sky The sky is turning into different seasons Soon I forgot" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I enjoyed every line, great piece dear friend! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
enjoyed your poem, good job. |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I just love this, Vandana. It is so expressive and enjoyable to read aloud. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
vandana This is a beautiful expression. I like the day dreaming effect you have written in here. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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