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Namyh
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0 posted 2009-05-07 05:20 PM


The Rush of Lust

I was caught in an orgasmic rush of Lust
that burned my soul into ashened dust.
It gripped like a current plummetting within
as blood cells roasted in sizzling Sin.
Hot images flipped thru my mind like pages.
Nerve endings fired with synaptic rages.
My breath was shortened 'til there was hardly none.
Then, I gasped for air in each Love stunned lung.

My veins expanded for blood in and out.
Nostrils flared for the oxygen drought.
My pores burst open to release the sweat
that would cool the body's pulsing jets.
My temperature felt to be one hundred and seven
where convulsions occur enroute to Love heaven.
I was spellbound caught in this majestic rapture
that all men and women must yield to capture.

Being caught just once is all that's needed
to prime this yearning with a need to feed it.
And such appetite Urge of sacred distinction
is Man fighting back from the edge of extinction
on an arc of passion burning far and wide
that bends towards peace when its fire subsides
to wait in the high grass for that pelvic thrust
from the pounce of the panther in a rush of Lust.
                       Whew !!

Namyh


[This message has been edited by Namyh (05-08-2009 12:06 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2009-05-07 05:25 PM


"Whew! " is right!!!! I'll have what you're having! ~ NOW! lol

FANTASTIC ~ What a rush!!!


EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-05-07 05:42 PM


quote:
I was spellbound caught in this majestic rapture
that all men and women must yield to capture.




No doubt! Now this, dear Namyh, was a treat to read and to experience!

I must second my dear friend Linda's FANTASTIC!

This poem lacks nothing, it's so full of emotion.

Love,
Margherita


unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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3 posted 2009-05-08 07:35 PM


Whew is right...

Perhaps you and your panther would like to visit us in Mature?

Primal.

H

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