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Raindance
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0 posted 2009-05-05 10:23 PM



I am Raven, I am free
I wonder not, I am at peace
I hear ancestral drumbeats sound
I see their paths upon the ground
I want to soar the highest breeze
I am Raven, I am free

I pretend I am a flute
I feel music, I know truth
I touch hearts and thoughts with ease
I worry not, I am at peace
I cry, I croon in harmony
I am Raven, I am free

I understand my purpose here
I say thank you, I’ve no fear
I dream of worlds where love abides
I try the wings of angel guides
I hope for nothing, I’m at peace
I am Raven, I am free


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this is beautiful
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2 posted 2009-05-06 12:57 PM


Lovely writing, Raindance.
                    Ida

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3 posted 2009-05-06 11:07 AM


This is beautiful! *S*
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4 posted 2009-05-06 12:32 PM


You surely are the raven!
I enjoyed reading this immensely.

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5 posted 2009-05-06 12:38 PM


What a treat to get a peek into what makes you, you!!!

Loved the poem! Loved learning more about you!

Beautiful writing! Beautiful spirit!

Love & Light,

EA



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6 posted 2009-05-06 01:29 PM


One of my favorite: "I AM" poems,

very very cool
Tracey.

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7 posted 2009-05-07 08:54 AM


I get very harmonious sounds and visions through your beautiful words, dear Raindance.

Very well written!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2009-05-07 08:57 AM


Lovely writing.
Raindance
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9 posted 2009-05-07 09:22 AM


Thank you, dear poets. You have me soaring the highest breezes today!
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10 posted 2009-05-08 07:23 PM


Ravens are the mystics, and the tree talkers.  Wonderful write.
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